Comic strip of your novel

Aim: the purpose of this assignment is to allow you to share with the class the first part of the novel you are reading through a multimodal text; in this case a comic strip. A comic strip is "a sequence of drawings, either in color or black and white, relating comic incident, an adventure or mystery story, etc., often serialized, typically having dialogue printed in balloons, according..." (Dictionary.com).

Instructions:
 1. You need to have read the first 5 chapters of your novel. 
2. Your task is to tell the story focusing on the main events and central characters.  
3. With this instruction in mind, create the comic strip. 
4. I chose this program  http://www.toondoo.com/Home.toon because it seems user friendly,  however feel free to use any other program that you know. I have seen other programs such as http://www.makebeliefscomix.com/Comix/ or http://www.comicstripcreator.org/
5. Post or embed your comic strip below. 
6. React to two of your classmates comics by Wednesday before class. In the reaction post, besides commenting on your classmates creativity or plot, suggest corrections to language mistake  you may encounter. 
7. Grading scheme> 3 points for comic post, 2 points for the two reply posts. 

Let me know if you have any questions!

96 comments:

  1. Hi, teacher. We are not going to have class on monday; It´s holiday :)

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  2. So that means we have until Wednesday?😀😀😀😀

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  4. Good evening guys. I leave you the link to my comic strip about the first five chapters of Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. Enjoy it :3

    https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B44nDYWkJf7jclE2cnNudUhPanc

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    1. HAHAHAH "He also know he is really, incredibly ugly" hahahha it was my favorite part. I think you did a good job. There are some things I couldn't remember such as the hour or the city. You capture the essence pretty well. Moreover, I don't find mistakes in this comic.

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    2. Hey Angela you did an awesome job, I have already read some pages from this book and your comicstrip gathered a very detailed information. another aspect that I want to highlight, it's the design you used for showing the period of time in which the story was developped, i think it was in 1900's.

      good job :)

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    3. Hello, Angela. I think your comic strip is well built, you manage to summarize it in an accurate way, I want to highlight in a positive way the scenarios and the characters, you choose wisely. Congratulations

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    4. Hello Angela. I really liked you comic, I think you did an accurate representation of the main events in these 5 chapters. I don't know if I'm the one wrong, but I think in the sixth box you and "I" when Utterson is telling Mr. Hyde he doesn't he deserves Dr. Jekyll's will. Also, in that part you wrote forgot the capital letter in the "I" in the same dialogue. Other than that I enjoy it, you even caracterized your own characters. Great job.

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    5. Hi Angela. You comic strip is very good. Even thought we're reading the same book, our comics are pretty different. You summarized it in a different way and it is very clear, enjoyable and cool. There's nothing else to say, you did great.

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    6. Hi guys, thank you all for your comments, they are really helpful. I'll work on my mistake :)

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  6. hey guys i'm Reading animal farm, which is quite good because in somehow it shows the reality of our own society; i hope you enjoy it: this is the link it posted on my drive https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B2PkgcUq0r0gSU04RTRIc0l4S3c

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    1. Hi Samuel,

      Firstly, I would like to say your comic is pretty well done, I could understand the main idea, it seems to be a good book. Secondly, I found some mistakes in your comic.

      1. In the second box you have a mistake in the word "Say".
      2. "Man" singular VS "Men" plural ← This is really important.
      3. Remember the pronoun "I" is always in capital letter.
      4. Take care with the punctuation.

      I hope my comments can help you.

      With love,
      Kathe♥♥

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    2. Hey Samuel, great job bro!!
      Good story, I like the way you summarized it, and also the images were very appropriate and in accordance with the story.
      Besides the mistakes Katherine highlighted I found two more:
      - In the 4th box you said: "I´d like sharing" but you should have used:
      I´d like TO share. Take a look: es.talkenglish.com/lessondetails.aspx?ALID=2015
      - In the 6th box you said: "the animal started created" I know it's probably because you mistakenly typed the wrong letters. You should have said: started to create or started creating.

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    3. Hi Samuel. I think you made a great job. I had already read this book and I can say you presented the main idea of it so well. Our friends have already said some of the problems in your comic strip so, I have nothing more to say.
      PH: I love snowball.

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    4. Hi Samuel c:
      I liked the way you represented your book. The images were appropiated and helped me to follow the story.
      Here are the mistakes I found:
      To late - Too late
      Now Mr Jone is gone - Now that Mr Jone is gone (I'm not sure, but it sounds better haha)
      I would like sharing -I would like to share
      Our lifes are miserable - Our lives are miserable - Our miserable lives

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  8. Hey Thank You, I don't what I make the same **** mistakes, even in spanish I forget the Captital letter hahahaha It could be a mental problema jajajajaja but I think form now on I will be more carefully when writing.

    Of course your comments are always useful... :) feel free about that It's the best thing You can do For me :)

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  9. you see (form*, For*)?? I hate myself jajajajaaja

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  11. Hi dear classmates, this is my comic strip. I'm reading "the strange case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde" I hope you enjoy it.

    PS. Please wait the image to charge, it is quite heavy.

    https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B9yy6aGTcF4HWlFPYUw3Uk1CRnJfTTdUZXBpc1pLMGdyQWM4

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    1. Hello Leidy, I hope you´re well
      Your comic is nice, I find it very complete, it's kind of a suspense comic and the story follows a logic sequence.
      Just two things I would correct:
      - In the 6th box you used the word "ever" twice: "I don´t EVER want to talk about it EVER again"
      - In the 14th box you said: "are you hinding Mr. Hide". I just don´t know if you wrote HINDING trying to say another thing or if you wrote it on purpose and it's me who doesn't know what it means, please tell me.

      But other than that it was a great comic, it´s noticeable the effort you put into it.
      Great job!

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    2. The "hinding" thing was a spelling mistake, I didn't notice it, thanks.
      And tbh, also didn't notice the double Ever, and thanks again.

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    3. Hello May. I loved you comic, speacially all the little details you put on like the blood and the characters expressions. I also noticed the spelling mistakes that Mario mentioned and that the correct name is "Dr. Jekyll" haha you wrote "Mr. Kelyll". Even though, I found it funny and accurate. Great Job! :)

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    4. Hello sevishana. It's me xd. First of all I really liked your comic strip as Mario and Jessica did. I noticed the mistakes but I must say that those were just some silly mistakes anyone can make, so, no worries. I know you and I know that your writing skill is like suppppper well! Anyways, congratulations and... bye bye Mr. Kelyll. #kidding jajaj. See you around.

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  12. I'm leaving here the link of my comic strip about the first 5 chapters of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. I hope you like reading it. :)
    https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B0DPQuszyxqOT1I3TGFRM1RuVzg/view?usp=sharing

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    1. Hi Daniel, I really liked your comic strip. I'm working with the same novel and you did a great work. You could pay attention to some spelling mistakes you did, like missing capital letters in names or after a period, or interogation marks, I think you know how to use them but sometimes you just forget about them. :)


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    2. Hi, Dani, I really liked your comic strip and the way you divided it in chapters.
      I think the frame i liked the most is the one where Enfield tells Mr. Utterson the story about the girl.

      I also noticed some grammar mistakes:
      1. It is not "Did you ever remark that door?" is: "have you ever remarked that door?" or "did you remark that door?"

      2. In the fourth frame, i don't understand what do you mean by saying "name your figure"

      3. in the 8th frame, the past form of "leave" is not "leaved" is "left"

      4. And finally, in the frame number 24, I don't know who "Pepe" is.

      Congrats.

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    3. Hey Daniel!
      I think your comic strip was good, even how you split up the chapters so it looks very cool. You did a great work when you customized a lot of the main's character expressions haha, that was hilarious. My other classmates have given you some advices so I wouldn't like to repeat the same; just be careful with the capital letters and the use of certain expressions that do not exist in english. Other than that, your comic strip was amazing.

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    4. Hello my friendo. Here I am in order to comment and react from your comic strip.

      Anyways, I gotta say I really like the way you put all the story together in a summarized way. I also must say that I really had fun with your comic strip. It was hilarious. Ahm, I think our friend Leidy just told you what the mistakes were, so basically I don't need to mention it again. But, I realized that at the beginning of chapter 4 it says "Hes has murdered"... Well, I think you may accidentally added an "s" after the pronoun. Or maybe you wanted to say "He's murdered" and added the aux "has" without intention. It depends on how you wanted to say that xDD. Congrats Dani.

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    5. Hey, Daniel! I really liked the way you structured the comic, i like the story a lot and in those chapters you divided very well the main events. Well, I think you should pay attention to little things like for example "leaved" or "be hiding a murderer", besides those kind of things it was very cool

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    6. Hi guys, Thanks for your comments. With the expression "name your figure", in the pdf I am reading, Mr. Hyde said the same expression. I think in spanish is like: "ponganle precio" or something like that, but I wrote the sentence as it was in the book. :)

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  13. Hello everyone, here's the link to my comic strip. The book I'm reading is The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald. The story takes place in the 1920's America, hope you like it.

    https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7TTL6NzJ2NEREFtVmozTGJlLWc/view?usp=sharing

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    1. Hi Isabella!
      Thank you for sharing your comic strip with us! You did a good job! c:
      I didn't find mistakes; however I'm not really sure, because there were some parts that I couldn't understand clearly because of the font size.

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    2. Hello Leslie, thank you for commenting my post.
      Yes, I know in some panels is a bit hard to read the text, I tried my best.
      However, I appreciate your support. See you.

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    3. Hey Isa!

      I want to congratulate you, I'm reading the same book, and I know that it's hard to summarise it. You nailed it! I didn't find grammar mistakes but there is a little detail: Gatsby said that he hasn't seen Daisy for 10 years, but really they haven't seen each other for 5 years. Other than that, I loved it!

      Have a lovely day! =)

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    4. Hey Nathalia :)

      Thanks for commenting my comic, and yes it was hard picking out the information that could link the situations and characters. Also, my bad, I guess I didn't go and check before writing the years.
      Anyways, thanks again for your support!

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  14. hey isabella,
    I really enjoyed your job while Reading, it seems to be you included every single detail from the story in the comicstrip which allowed me to have a general idea about the book.

    I also want to extol how well you omitted the subject when it wasn't necessary to add it... in somehow it allowed me to be concious about when I can omit it.

    good job ;)

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  15. Hello guys, here's my comic strip. It is about Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. I hope you like it.

    https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B6dBryXTQFd7bC1NcmpNNkwtVkk

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    1. Hello there petite Fleur, I loved your comic strip. I'm working on the same novel and for sure you did a great work. I don't think there are mistakes, so you did good. I found it very funny though, keep up the good work :D

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    2. Flaaar. I loved your comic strip. It was well sumarized, accurate and mostly, funny. I didn't find any grammar mistakes. You did a great job! :)

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    3. Hello Jessica Flor. Your comic strip is very interesting. In my opinion, it could be better to change the panel´s color when the woman was saying what she saw. I make this suggestion because I am not reading that story and I got a little confused with this part. But in general terms, I think your comic strip is nice and I´d like to follow its process.
      Thanks to share it !

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    4. Hi, Flawis. As always, you made a great job. I don't have any comments about grammar, maybe organization of the frames could be better, but I could understand everything very well, as charlie said, it was very funny.

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  16. Hey guys, here's the link of my comic strip. The book I'm reading is "The strange case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde". I hope you find it interesting or funny at least :D

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1e6uauNln84JWU2strRngbekg4_6-yHsSSCzODUGB2_0/edit?usp=sharing

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    1. Charls! I liked your comic strip. I didn't see any mistakes. It was really well done and you stick to the mains events and dialogues. Congratulations, I can see that you put a lot of effort on it. Nice :D

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    2. Hey babe!!!!

      I loved you comic, the way you summarised the story is great and it's easy to follow. I didn't find any grammar mistakes, just pay attention in the use of capital letters in some words. But you did an amazing job!!! =)

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  17. Hello everyone, here's the link of my comic strip. I'm reading "The strange case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde". I hope you like it.

    https://docs.google.com/a/correounivalle.edu.co/document/d/13MwVvM_eImWyD-ByS5FUBTuG6ZPwisb_6N9xr7s8XIU/edit?usp=sharing

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    1. Hi Patisho, I just want to say that this is, by far, my favourite comic strip, the "ay papi" or the "no mijo" OMG that killed me, and that gives the character more life. I don't see any mistakes so great job, fille de Carla, you did it again!

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    2. Hello Juan! First of all, I really like your comic strip. You developed the story very well and I could understand what the story was about. Putting some jokes here and there also helped your work, it makes it more attractive and well I can see that you put a lot of effort in your comic, good job :)

      I found this mistake, I think maybe you should check it:
      - In the second part, last panel, you wrote "We asked him to pay for what he's done." but since its something that happened in the past, I think the correct tense should be "We asked him to pay for what he HAD done (he'd done)."

      There are also a couple of misspellings, but I imagine you didn't notice when you made them, they are:
      - In the third part, (III panel) you wrote "forniture" instead of "furniture".
      - In the eighth part (II panel) you wrote "now" and I think you meant to write "know".

      Other than those details, I think you did a great job! See you in class.

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    3. Jajajaja Juan, you're the best I genuinely loved your comic so much that i didn't see mystakes in it

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    4. Hello Pato, I really loved your comic strip, I liked the jokes with the maid. I laughed a lot reading it. I just noticed the mistakes of misspellings, but in general, it was very great. <3

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  18. Hi everyone!
    I'm reading The Steppenwolf- Herman Hesse. Here's the link of my comic strip:

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1A5MzJ3K9KXUWY20fHdLilDXdbnzAIKgrDHDSPbX-imI/edit?usp=sharing

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    1. Hello Leslie!

      Your story seems very interesting and it looks like you summed up the content very well. I can see that you put effort into it and I also liked how you didn't stick to one type or form of the panels, but you varied them a little, it was a nice touch.

      I found this mistakes, and think you should check them :

      - In the preface the phrase "...records left us by a man whom...". It should be "the records left TO us by a man...".
      - In the third panel you wrote "biginning" instead of "beginning".
      - In the fourth panel, if you write "...but she didn't want to." it's not very clear what you want to say, you could put "she wouldn't tell me anything else" or "she didn't want to tell me more".

      Nice job, See you in class.

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    2. Hi Lesli, you set the context of the story smoothly and left the reader eager to know what the manuscript is about. I think the images also help build the context. Here are some mistakes you made. I think you needed to proofread it before posting it; you know these mistakes:
      Panel 1:
      records left us: record left TO us
      whom: WHO
      whom, according to the expression: this is not clear
      he used himself: This is not clear.
      We called the steppenwolf: I am not sure what you want to say. You mean: he was called.
      Panel 2:
      I found this matter: you mean I found this way? manner?
      He came looking for the room my aunt had to let: perhaps you mean: had to RENT?
      at the biginning: BEginning
      Panel 4:
      notifythe: notify the
      acept: aCCept
      ...but she didn´t want to. but she didn't want TO TELL ME
      Panel 5:
      in front ofothre´s people doors: in front of other people´S doors
      littlevestibule: little vestibule
      Panel 10:
      One day he left our town one day and vanished: One day he left our own and vanished

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  19. Hi guys, sorry for posting my comic at this hour. It's about Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. Hope you like it
    https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Bx0rAWk01Nlbei1haVhrTUtmTE0

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    1. Hi Jessica I liked the way you showed the two realities with the black and white parts, but I was a little confused and couldn't follow the history completely.

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  20. Hello, people. Here's my comic about The Great Gatsby C:

    https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B1xhURdGh__aY09UaE1WLVBxQUU

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    1. Oh dude I loved your comic strip is hilarious XD XD I think you really captured the plot in those images. The characters were well defined and the story was clear.
      Nice job
      Love you

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    2. Hello Daniela Garzón.

      I liked your comic; It was nice. Despite I don´t know the story that you´re reading, I could follow it. I´d like to suggest you to pay attention to the punctuation marks.
      Thanks for sharing it !

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    3. Hi Daniela, I really enjoyed your comic was fun, and the story was good.

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    4. Hi Daniela,
      I liked the way you represented the first 5 chapters of the book you are reading. Just to remain you the pronoun ‘I’ that it is capitalized in English. Nice job.

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  21. Hi guys, sorry for posting late TT_TT I am a really retarded person when using this kind of tools. My book is The strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. I hope you like it♥ Feel free to comment it .

    https://docs.google.com/a/correounivalle.edu.co/document/d/1dwPozZl6OXbfX6RBuM6oR0we8cORur019E1Hnb8Fz4k/edit?usp=sharing

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    1. Hi Katherine,
      I liked your picture choices. I think you describe the storyline well. I think the opening was little abrupt. The characters needed a smoother transition. Perhaps because you do not have a narrator. You close the chapters with a good hook to entice the reader. Here are some mistakes I identified:
      Panel 1:
      yes, is terrifying door: yes:, IT is A terrifying door. (note: all sentences in english have a SUBJECT)
      Panel 3:
      Right on this street...were walking, when they met in the corner the crashed: Right on this street...were walking. When they met in the corner, they crashed. (punctuation)
      Panel 7:
      meeting...: At a meeting
      Panel 8:
      explain you: explain TO you.
      Panel 10:
      explain us: explain TO us
      Panel 11:
      I was at home looking at the window: looking THROUGH the window
      Began to wound the old: began to attack to heart (a wound is the result of an attack witha weapon)
      Panel 12:
      looking for some clue: for some clueS
      in the case, he found: FOR the case. He found...
      seemedto: seemed to
      Panel 13:
      I need to visit...again, I need to clarify: I need to visit...again. I need (punctuation)
      Panel 14:
      The he showed: theN he showed...


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    2. Hi KT, I liked your comic strip very much. I found some mistakes:
      1. Remember that in English, we need to put the subject always (chart No. 02 "IT is a terrifying door")
      2. I think it is "How did you say he looks LIKE?" (chart No. 05)
      3. The -> THEN? (chart No. 14)

      PD. I loved the way you used images, they are really creative and original :)

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  22. Hi Lesli, you set the context of the story smoothly and left the reader eager to know what the manuscript is about. I think the images also help build the context. Here are some mistakes you made. I think you needed to proofread it before posting it; you know these mistakes:
    Panel 1:
    records left us: record left TO us
    whom: WHO
    whom, according to the expression: this is not clear
    he used himself: This is not clear.
    We called the steppenwolf: I am not sure what you want to say. You mean: he was called.
    Panel 2:
    I found this matter: you mean I found this way? manner?
    He came looking for the room my aunt had to let: perhaps you mean: had to RENT?
    at the biginning: BEginning
    Panel 4:
    notifythe: notify the
    acept: aCCept
    ...but she didn´t want to. but she didn't want TO TELL ME
    Panel 5:
    in front ofothre´s people doors: in front of other people´S doors
    littlevestibule: little vestibule
    Panel 10:
    One day he left our town one day and vanished: One day he left our own and vanished

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  23. Hi guys in this link you'll find the folder with my comic strip, it is called Great Gatsby, thanks.

    https://drive.google.com/drive/u/1/folders/0B_OQ5_KPWd8oOWxydV9NaE55MFU

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    1. Dudee I noticed that Gatsby seems to be Jonny Bravo's cousin jajaja just kidding. You divided well the scenes because they follow the line of the story as it happens, the characters are the important ones and the dialogues are great, nice job C:

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    2. hahaha Behave Dude... Thanks I tried to make the characters as similar as the program let me haha

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    3. Manu I loved your comic but I loved more that sexy boy! haha It was a good story, great job!

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    4. Hi Manuela. I want to tell you that I liked you comic strip. Even though the briefly of it, it's clear and I would really like to know what's gonna happen next. I only perceived one mistake and it was when Nick was talking about the Gatsby's parties. It says "their" and I think you meant all the people who attend to his parties. So instead of 'their' I think it's 'they're'. I can tell you did a great job and I can see the effort on it. Have a good night:)

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  24. Hello guys!
    This is my comic strip's link about the book I'm reading: The Steppenwolf by Herman Hesse.

    https://docs.google.com/a/correounivalle.edu.co/document/d/1Ppj9EGt0Jm9X6Ham5vYh7FnnSK-gTBCQfCgosr11sjU/edit?usp=sharing

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    1. Hey, I really enjoy it your cómic strip, you catch the best moments, well I tried to find grammar mistakes but I didn't find. Good job.

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  26. Hello guys. This is my comic strip. Thanks and hope you all have a lovely night.
    https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B8aEihJADuKrUWV3RkFmS0JSNktOSC1JR3hMWFBzZHd0cWJB

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    1. Hi Laura!

      First of all, I would like to tell you that you made a great job and I liked the fact that you summarized your chapters in a very sustancious way.
      The only mistake I found was in the second panel where it says: We are goinT to ruin his life IS he doesn´t. Just the misspelling of goint: going, and IS instead of IF.

      As I said, good job!

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    2. Thanks Camilo, I hadn't noticed it, yeah it was if instead of is. Thank you very much :)

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  27. Hey, I am reading " The adventures of Robinson Crusoe". and here´s my comic, I hope that you enjoy it.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ymndIFo4CCnUN_xDg7tvA3KbftEQIrziAaC4JSCXrHc/edit?usp=sharing

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    1. Hi Andrea!
      I think that you have created a good comic. However, I recommend you to take into account the font size, because in some parts it is very small and I couldn’t read them easily. Also, I want to show you some mistakes:
      -in the panel 3: ‘if he stays at home’ instead of ‘if he stay in home’
      -in the panel 14: ‘Where am I?’ instead of ‘Where I am?’

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    2. Hi Paola :D
      I found your comic strip interesting because we're reading the same book and at the time to present the story here, it is doing ina different way but transmitting the same mean.

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  28. Hello Guys! here is the link where you'll find my comic strip, I'm reading The yellow wallpaper, thanks.

    https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0ByT_VHmLs7htTGdVallFX2dsVVU

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    1. Hi Lisy!
      Your comic strip is good, when I read it I found it interesting and even more so when the story begins to talk about the mystery. I'd like to finish reading your comic strip. :)

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  29. Hello, my book is ''The Adventures of Robinson Crusoe'' Here is the link of my comic strip.
    https://drive.google.com/open?id=1CqDpkRioK1zbqNoei5woggZ7J8ooy-2d3RPWFiEfRrc

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    1. Hi Laura!
      I was looking your comic and I think it is very interesting, at the begining because of the images chance, also because I found things that I didn't find in the book when i read it, for example that Robinson lived in Brazil for a time. Well, I don't remember this part from the book. Every day, I learn something new, even little things, world and life is amazing. I tried to make a grammar review, but sincerely I didn't find any grammar mistake. I think you are improving your english skills, so great job, and keep the way.

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    2. Laura, we are reading the same book, this is awesome, well tour cómic strip was so cool and you tried to show The best part of each chapter. The only recommendation is that not forget mention simple thing. For example, his father disagreed with him because he think that if he leave the house he will be a miserably person. So, Robinson didn't come to his house for many reasons one of them it for his father.
      You did a great job. But don't forget the simple details.

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    3. Hello Laura,
      I love Robinson Crusoe. I have read it twice. I like the choice of images to illustrate the story. Good summary.
      Here´s some things to correct:
      Panel 7:
      He became a owner: He became THE OWNER
      and he want to start a new adventure: he wantED to start..
      Panel 8: Only Robinson survived the shore of an island: this is not clear. Perhaps. Only he survived and swam to the shore of an island.
      Panel 10:
      he built a rudimentary hut. Then built a house: then HE built a house (all sentences in English have a subject)
      You have very few mistakes and you used very good language to express your ideas!

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  30. Hey guys, sorry for the delay. Here is my comic about 'The Great Gatsby' By F. Scott Fitzgerald. I hope you like it! Have a lovely night. =)

    https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B0McqpYosi5nMUp2TlNvWXg3WVU

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    1. Hey Nath,

      I liked your comic strip, I can see you made a big effort to do it and it reflects in the quality of your comic. The only thing I can advice is not to use a lot of text in a square or a scene. Anyways, I could understand it all. Good job!

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  31. Good Morning, everyone. This is my comic about Animal Farm.

    http://integratedenglishskills.blogspot.com.co/p/comic-strip-of-yoru-story.html

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  32. Hello everyone !

    This is the link of my comic: https://drive.google.com/a/correounivalle.edu.co/file/d/0B4UL7jjlUIkkT1FBTDNTMVVjZW8/view?usp=sharing

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  33. My book is Tom Sawyer

    https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B-U-Ar5-HBtQYTk3Z0RSUXF5bzg

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  34. My Comic...
    https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4qEWUB94sZmRk5yMGhsYzhLc3c

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